The Worst Birthday EVER!

Thursday 28th June
Today is my birthday! Mum and dad have decided to book a restaurant that we can walk to so we can celebrate. I don’t think I am supposed to be up yet so I think I should get back to sleep.
9:50.
My brother is finally up and I am super excited, I am getting into my blue shorts and top. Hmmm I wonder what I could have for breakfast, I know pancakes!
“MUM,DAD ARE YOU AWAKE…YOU PROBABLY ARE NOW…BUT THAT’S NOT THE POINT!” I hope today will be nice, yesterday was boring┬áit was raining all morning!

One thought on “The Worst Birthday EVER!”

  1. Hi Nia,
    Thank you for taking the time to post on the 100 Word Challenge. I loved your story! You had me hooked from the beginning. You balanced all the elements all the way through and it had a very natural flow. What was really good was the inclusion of little details that really grab your reader. I look forward to reading more of your stories – keep up the good work!

    Mrs. T. (Team 100) Wiltshire UK

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