The Worst Birthday EVER!

Thursday 28th June
Today is my birthday! Mum and dad have decided to book a restaurant that we can walk to so we can celebrate. I don’t think I am supposed to be up yet so I think I should get back to sleep.
9:50.
My brother is finally up and I am super excited, I am getting into my blue shorts and top. Hmmm I wonder what I could have for breakfast, I know pancakes!
“MUM,DAD ARE YOU AWAKE…YOU PROBABLY ARE NOW…BUT THAT’S NOT THE POINT!” I hope today will be nice, yesterday was boring it was raining all morning!

One thought on “The Worst Birthday EVER!”

  1. Hi Nia,
    Thank you for taking the time to post on the 100 Word Challenge. I loved your story! You had me hooked from the beginning. You balanced all the elements all the way through and it had a very natural flow. What was really good was the inclusion of little details that really grab your reader. I look forward to reading more of your stories – keep up the good work!

    Mrs. T. (Team 100) Wiltshire UK

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