THE ZIPWIRE

One day, there was a girl called Esmay she loved going on the zip wire at the park. So her mum took her to the park and all she done was go on the zip wire. on one turn she got to confided and didn’t hold on properly  within in a second Esmay  had fell of the zip wire and in the bush she went. Her mum screamed she was so worried she didn’t know what to do all of these things were going threw her mind it was a massive shock. Her mum though maybe  I should call the abulenece………..

 

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  1. Dear Poppy,
    I really like how you said that she loves zip wires.But,there was a few spelling errors.Other then that,good job!! Keep up the good work!!

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