Time Flies

A girl named Angelica had a mirror in her attic that made so many strange noises at night. So on her fifthteenth Birthday she decided to take a look at that mysterious mirror! When the day came, she had her party and food, then she asked for some time alone but what they didn’t know was that she was actually going to the attic. Her attic was dark and dusty though she didn’t need to worry about that! The girl crept up the stepladder and peered into the darkness. She saw nothing but boxes and the mirror! The hopped up onto her knees and scrambled her way to the mirror. Angelica kneeled down and stared into the mirror and placed her hand gently on it… But to her surprise her hand went straight through it! She could see her brother, he was old! The girl stepped into the mirror and she saw herself in fifty years time! This mirror was a time teleporter! The vision faded. There she was, in her bed, like nothing happened!

Storyline based on a picture from Pobble365, April 26th.

One thought on “Time Flies”

  1. Dear Chloe,

    You did a very good job! You used a lot of descriptive words, and used vivid language. I can’t wait to see what you will write next!

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