Week 6 (no title)

This is my precious thing I have been keeping it in my special box for years. It was given by my parents when I was young and I’ve showed it in my old class for show and tell and people think it’s really cool and I’ll keep my special treasure in my special box for years and years and years and years and years until I’m about 41.And for the last thing is that I thank my parents for this special present, why am I saying special?, because my parents think I’m special, because special people go to crosshall, the best school in the one and only UK. Thank you for listening and have a great day!

3 thoughts on “Week 6 (no title)”

  1. Hi Max,
    I really like how you gave details about your special item i am still wondering what it is if you could please right back to me and say what it was. But for the rest of the story it was really good. I also really liked how you told me who gave to you. I wonder if you ever really take it out do you only take out on special occasions or like do take out a lot. I wish you gave more descriptive words to make it more easy to know what your special item was. But the rest of it was really good.

  2. Hey Max! I just read your story and I have a few things to say. Firstly, you did a great job explaining what the special object meant to you and how you got it so great job on that part! Also, can you tell me what your item is, I’d love to know! Keep up the good posts!

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