What Is It?

One day I was walking down the road and I saw three of my friends there names were Hannah, Chloe and Poppy. They were going down the local pools slides. Then I came in the pool and I said, “hi ” and asked Hannah,”wasn’t it just us two”. “Yare but then they said to me who are you waiting for, so yare and anyway, come in “explained Hannah. Then when I went down the slide I saw something glittering in the water I thought what is that thing on the floor. So I swam down picked it up, when I was holding it I didn’t know what it was. It was glittery, pink it shimmers in the light it looks so beautiful but I really didn’t know what it was.

2 thoughts on “What Is It?”

  1. Hi Amelia!!!
    I really liked all the details you put into your piece. I just have one thing I am confused on is what is the word yare?? It seems like a odd word to me. Anyway for something you can work on in the future that you should capitalize the first letter of the word when you put the quotes in. Also are those names Chloe,Hannah,and Poppy your really friends or did you make them up???

    Anya in Illinois.

    1. Hi Amelia,
      Well, I am not sure what it is either! Did you find out? A pool toy? Bracelet? Did you keep it, and is it now your most treasured item? It’s always fun to find interesting things:)
      Mrs. Kimball (Team 100)
      AEWright Middle School
      Calabasas, CA USA

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